New Page 14 versus the Original Page 14
So this week’s page went back under the knife. I knew when I was drawing the original I was skipping out on a bit of character design by just having Station 3 and the chief and a bunch of dialogue. You were never sure who the Chief was speaking with but you knew when the chief spoke. Later in the story I was forced to do a little character work and I was able to apply it here. The Bear shows up in one more panel just as this chapter is wrapping up. I spent a little time last week restructuring the top portion of the page by shrinking the main panel to a little over half a page. Its nice to have a little extra time with this presentation and the added panels do create a larger sense of urgency than just the dialogue and the Station. I do love the size of Station 3 on the page!
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